Shredder05's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Liquid Malevolence]

Not Bad. Some things to work on would be mixing it up a bit, and making use of more notes. Seems like the minor 7th is being abused a bit, try taking some different direction.

TheyCallMeCaudex responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'll see what I can do.

[RazorMan Menu Loop]

Nice dissonance but not a fan of the snare drum... drum needs to be tweaked. I can tell a snare roll would sound good but i don't think you captured it

SirKoto51 responds:

I actually have not spent too much time on this. Admittedly, I probably spent the least amount on panning out and sort of playing around with the sound... Now to think of it, I do not think I have even listened to the song with headphones, yet. I may make improvements to this, eventually. I know I was kinda going for a dissonant/ominous feel, but even to me, this feels quite a bit empty. Thanks for the feedback, man. :)

[Project Aries - [Experime]

Repetitive, but keep at it!

I think if you want to improve on this, try mixing it up a bit more. Add some key changes or rhythm changes, and make the phrases a bit more distinct.

ferret854 responds:

Thanks, although techno is usually semi-repetitive, this does overboard it. Main thing I was going for was the different sounds same notes, Just fiddling with the dials on the sytrus modulation. But yes I agree I am weak in rhythm composition. Listen to my other work and tell me If I've improved much.

Also... Thanks for being supportive, It really improved my opinion of Newgrounds as a whole to see at least one person give productive feedback to assist in the composing process. PM me back ill give you the Midi file I saved it as because I have FL studio demo pretty much.